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Old 11-10-04, 04:22 PM   #10
Wickedclown
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Voted For: Katastrophikal

aight this was a fairly tight battle.. kinda one sided tho.
here is my breakdown.....

King- punches and personals where hit and miss, not really a factor and that hurt you big time. wordplay was ok and so was creativity. your structure was off also so definatly work on ya structure. overall i have seen better from you, no hate to you on that tho. 5/10

Kata- you had a pretty tight verse, i was feelin it... punches and personals hit hardcore and that wins battles, this is my favorite line:

Your Lines Is Gettin "Shit On" Like You Was "Diapers"
My Flow Have Ya Going "Back And fourth" Like "Windshield Wipers"

your wordplay and creativity was pretty tight too.... strucuture much like kings needs improvement tho. so elevate on strucuture and ya got it! good verse, this is the first battle of yours ive seen and its pretty tight. 8/10

pretty decent battle, overall it was kinda one sided. no hate to king but elevate a little homie. good battle

VOTE-KATA.................