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I cool dis dudes ryhmes like dentyne ice and put his skills to da test./
da only time he on hot is when they talking bout his breath./
^^aight good opener flowed nice and had creativity i liked it

How you expect to go up against the master when you rhyming partial./
If did dude claims to be on fire you could call me da fire marshall./
^^ aight good punch hit real hard flowed nice and good vocab

I put out flames faster doing the winter time./
You stepped to me and spit whack linez, shit like dat will get you flat lined./
^^your structure lacked in this line good closer flowed good

aight all in all you had really good punched only one line was stretched and you had every line as a personal which made ur verse all the better
7/10

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ur the master of dickriding so jusmp of mine*
nigga stop being a herb n fuck off dont wine
^^eh okay punch wasnt to good i wasnt feeling this opener flowed well tho

dont fuck with me but u did so prepare to die
man get out ur dads ars n stop sticking it high
^^gay jokes are pretty much played and that was a weak one flowed good

hope u like hole cuz u'll have 1 in ur head
sting u up like i was spiderman n shoot u dead
^^eh weak closer flowed okay coulda been better

overall you came really weak you only won in the structure catagory you had a simple verse basic vocab so work on that a lot but you had okay flow just fix up everything else
4/10

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