Voted For: streetryda

streetryda
structure is ok.. ur lines are a little stretched though.. flow fell off a little due to the stretchnes.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was alright.. some of ur punches connected.. attempted personals..

Reloaded
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. its newbish.. structure is ok.. ur line lengths were inconsistent though.. flow fell off a little due to the inconsistency.. no multis.. wack wordplay.. attempted punches, but none of them came out.. no good personals..

Overall
both had a decent structure.. both flows fell off.. streetryda had more multis.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. streetryda gets my vote..

VOTE - STREETRYDA

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