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Old 11-10-04, 09:45 PM   #22
Magic5
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Voted For: Kwell

Kwell
structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was pretty dope.. most of ur punches connected.. the concepts were pretty good as well.. u had no personals..

LIL'DREW
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. structure is decent.. flow is pretty good.. no multis.. attempted wordplay, but it came out wack.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
both had an alright structure.. as well as an alright flow.. neither had good personals.. Kwell had more multis.. better wordplay, and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Kwell gets my vote..

VOTE - KWELL

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