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Old 11-10-04, 11:13 PM   #21
Terse.
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Voted For: Mimesis

aight,
Mimesis, ya verse was straight...structure was nice, but i didnt feel much flow to it.....but u did have punches that were decent and had good ideas behind 'em...n the personals were good too...overall good consistency, every line hit your opponent...

Lethal, i didnt like ya verse dawg....i would say that the structure was prolly the only good thing here...i didnt see any personals...n the punches werent really hard-hittin...it seemed like u werent even tryin here man...

V/ Mimesis, for better overall verse and more consistency...ho hate, jus some honest feedback...