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New to RV
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IP:
Lol..
Umm...
You kinda sound weird, I thought you was mumbling at first...
You have to get emotion and delivery and RAP...
You're talking.....and you are offbeat like crazy...
Work on ya flow....
Constructive criticism, NOT HATE....
Basically work on sticking to the beat,
Work on emotion, Mic presence,
Flow and get a little more lyrical..
Because you're rhymign is basic and
You basically have no style.
Elevate.
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