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Old 11-11-04, 12:57 AM   #3
Phenom-in-all
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welcome back playa. whats up with the t-squad ish? Clear them thangs. Anyways - song is aight. First cat is pretty good. Good flow, lyrics and emotion matches track well. Hook is nice too. This ya crew or what? So easy flows good too man. This verse is prolly a little better than Fortify's. "Gotta work harder so my kids kids kids can EAT" dope line. NNN - come off this so rugged man. Ya voice is mos def original, and stands out. Only critisism is switch ya flow up a bit. Its original, but almost monotone. Get the emotion workin and switch up ya flow and its sick man. 1
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