ok drop. simple yet showed your lyrical skill.
try structuring your shit better.

example..

my rhymes change time. like my words change lines. im a hot kid in my prime./
im on my lyrical grind.im not feeding u nickles and dimes./
nigga is gettin full when i take them to school.
using the right tool.ya'll run into the bright lite like a bull/
sirl here taking the throne. get i my way im taking ya home. braking ya bone. with out using the chrome/
it's a fact i put cats on they back and diss on there track.
im cheese ya'll run to me like rats.and feens run to crack/
im hot like hot sauce or boiling greens with the top off./
dj's is like sirl i need u on my beat..
and gangsta saying problems need u on the street!!/
i move like the greyhound.call me is what i say now nigga talk.. shit but rapverse is were u get laid down.what u got to say now..

this make's it easier to read.Also let's your flow show.

try using some multible rhyme's.

example.
....my rhymes change time. like my words changed lines.
im a hot kid in my aged prime. worth more than a caged dime..
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the multi's are..." changed line's"...."aged prime"..."caged dime"
these are simple multi's but it show's you the jist..

this is a allright drop..
keep dropping and keep elevating..
pz