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Old 11-11-04, 06:42 AM   #38
Tha Q
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This was feedback posted for GKillaz05

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The notorious BIG line was funny...but, he's not the only fat person in the world...kinda filler-ish

First time we clashed...we both battled like some titans...
After that battle was done, to call me out left ya frightened...
Now you think you got SKILLS and a new set of BALLS...
But they stink must have picked em up in a washroom stall...


^^Corny

Merkin' you faster then the yanks got by the red socks...
See your like Disney... the way your raps are G-Rated...
Seen ya pic now think you and Mike Jackson are related...
Got somethin up ya ass?.. lines stretched out like a thong...
www.whackbattlers.com is where this punk ass kid belongs...


^^Sounds like ur talking and not flowing...


Verse was nanny-panny...decent, but needed development and more complexity in punches
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