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Old 11-11-04, 01:40 PM   #27
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im gonna vote but not sure if i can but oo-well....

a loss is in your future, but dont get upset man
creative? fuck no...
i predicted every one of his punches in my fucking check in
ok start...

now sadly i must beat you & badly i must add
a winner?..
he's got the knicks in his avy & thats just bad
weak..

kids on my dick, so its easy to see im bound
that of course i cause trouble...
cuz kontroversy always seems to follow me around
decent diss...

kid gets pissed on more than the floors at a mcdonalds bathroom
ewwww
and then he.....
tried to earn his stripes & ended up looking like a racoon
ok...
ur punches, if you want to call them that are so old and behind
bu ill get u the vet book on....
"how to quit putting quotes to emphsize a punch because i cant construct a decent one so people wont notice how wack i am"
.... followed up by "how not to bold and use funny signs"
this shit was the weakest ending i ever saw and streched like a mother fucker...

all around decent verse 7.0

First Line, I thought i'd Spit some personals Against him,
......But he did it himself...
Like Short Wrestlers Competing in Ladder Matches,
.....Your missin' the belt...
ok opener...

This Kid has Low Confidence, So if Sdizzle Wins,
....i'ts because people feel sorry...
Your Just a minor attraction in the past, that turned into ass,
.......Like Atari...
decent..

"S-dizzle"? You and Snoop Dogg have reverse complications,
....Your diagnosed with a "Diet" Disorder...
The Only attractin Line you ever been through,
......Was crossing the American Boarder..
decent...

If you refuse to believe Im hot, then,
.....stop using My lines as a Furnace....
Bottom Lines, Swing for your ankles, like freeposts in battles,
.......I'm "de-feeting" "the Purpose"....
nice...

I stay in a Godly Position, So making it to heaven,
......you gotta get through me first... (impossible)
You couldn't "bone shit" even if you jumped off your roof,
.....and Landed Knee first...
ending could of been better

but i thought u had the better verse either way hard punches N diss...

8.0 outta 10 vote well read up-top N u should guess who i voted for...