Voted For: warrior

Breakdown.
murkage:
fags like you get shitted on by the Supreme Ballers
Ima Playa hata got more head than abes face on $20 dollars
^weak opener, very played and unoriginal.
Yo warrior wil get Shell shocked-Aim locked-Gonna get his Dome rocked
soon as you step out side-you hear me fully fledged shotgun get cocked
^ ok second line, no personal or hard punch, just a filler line.
Lyrically beat ya wit any instrument available-includin my shoe-
Bitch no one could smell ya flows even if u brought the canines thru
^this bar was probly the best in your verse but still weak.
your finnished-your done with uve been lyrikly injected with flu
this is just a taste of me-no wonder yo mam rejected you***
^shit closer, weak, played and unoriginal.
murkage work on your punches and try to work on throwing personals in your verse.

warrior:
battlein me herbs-get-scared ill rip ya words-apart/
dis lame needs to fix his name......and change "murk"-to-"garb"/(garbage)
^good opener, nice personal, not too original of a concept but it works.

murkage-is-a-homo im hurtin-kids-wit-no-hope/
u prolly had a betta chance of winnin if u no-showed/
^lol this line made me line, good punch but the second line has been used often but its still really dope.
see now im talkin crazy cause frankly u had no chance-at-all/
cause i could smell "defeat" in the air like u standin on ya hands-to-walk/
^weakest line in your verse but decent nonetheless.
dis mans-all-talk and if he said somtin hot i prolly said-it-before/
dis battles ova cause "age" aint meet the requirements to be ready-for-"war"/
^Good punch and closer your verse was definatly better.

Overall warrior takes this for having a better solid verse.murkage you know what you need to work on and I hope you will achieve thatin the future.

V/Warrior.
return the fav.