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Old 11-11-04, 04:35 PM   #11
Ras Tafari
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Voted For: intensify effect

breakdown of verses:
intensify effect:

yo sicka.cell better off leaving befor this captine expire ya mission.....
Cuz I.E gonna "Burn ya Bless'in" like my "Heat was Fryin Christan".....
^good opener, nice punch and average wordplay.
u got skill's bitch listen, R.V "Lable Ya Ass" a drug dealer the way u "Sell U'r Crack".... *ass*
u'r flow just lack, N we aint people when I "rip ya spine out" N let u know-- "I Got Ya Back".......
^lol nice line i like the wordplay and the concept is nice.
shit i'll keep throwin repetitive "punches-atchu" like a "sick-nigga" watchin We-Run-Sequals....
u a killah? i see no evil..... the only pound u got is giving dap to peoples....
^This line was decent I guess, nothing special but decent anyways.
so sicka.cell think he's sick but like flu vacinations ill take it outta-ya....
and leave u with a "problems on your hands" like u was "cheating in algebra"...
^Good closer, wordplay was good and the punch hit hard.

Sicka cell:
This Pussy "Vet" Think's He Dope when he's losin to Jokah*
My Flow's will Disembody ya Ryhme's & gradually Fold-Ya
^Weak opener, what does being a vet have to do with losing to someone whose record is over a hundred wins?
Ya come Weak as a Midget Old age Pensioner in a Wheelchair
Even If Ya possesed Mod Power's It still would'nt Be Fai
^Crap line, weak concept, think of something witty and original.

Slit Ya Wrist while i Take a Piss & Stamp Out His Fire**
I Preach Gangsta Verb's ta this Herb Like i'm the Messiah
^this line was ok, nothing special, the punch was pretty soft.
So Lemme Increase The Tension On My Elusive "Effect"
Coz This Pussy Lip's is Fluent in all Half-Assed Herb Defect's
^bad closer, this line was maybe the weakest in your verse, no punc, horrible wordplay, and bad concept.

Overall intensify wins it for having superior wordplay and original concepts.
V.intensify.
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