dont blame equipment, u need to work on ya flow
every1 knos a tight emcee would shine wit a $5 mic
i would say ya lyrics are str8 and vocab is good BUT
its quite borin to listen to ya cos THEY DONT MEAN SHIT
you use all this fancy words and it jus sound like ur readin
off one of ur topical battles, get a song subject and stick to it

"fuck the hype" <----- you sed that in ya verse, but YOUR WHOLE
FUCKIN VERSE WAS HYPE. no-one wants to here u talkin bout poppin'
a gun cos you will never. stick to wot is true then no-one will be able to
diss ya. you need to be oringial not a white 50 cent

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