"fuck the hype u know we tight"-- not bad, R Rated for a chorus but this is a hype song, am i the only one to notice.. but anywayz, the beat wasn't bad but it gets loud on certain parts... now your content, i don't know what ur content was leading to.. u need to pick a topic and stick to it.. u pausin' wasn't the problem.. it seems like u had a hard time pronouncin' some of your wordz.. and u tried to speed up for 2 seconds but it didn't sound right (the parts where you slurred your wordz to follow the beat)... you shouldn't have done that, but if u still workin' on it, good luck wit' ya..
no hate- just real feedback..
pz..

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