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Old 11-11-04, 10:23 PM   #9
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Voted For: frein-ma$ter

Red Beam- your verse was decent but you thought this was gonna be an easy ass battle for you so you only decided to write 6 lines...your punches were some what good ...your structure was good ...plus it was easy to read too...

Frein- Master- your verse was wayyyy better then Red Beam, plus you had more lines then him which also really helped you out too...your punches were good but some were weak but you had more lines with better punches then him overall you got my vote for better punches and verse....peace....

v/Frein-Master....
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