my favorite portion would be..

And Hiding Shame, But Fuck 'Em Their There For Reasons..
My Mind Cycles Emotions Eternally Like Tha 4 Seasons..
More Treasons Blemish On Our Governmental Lay-Outs..
Working 20 Hours A Day, And Being Sent Home, No Pay Out?..

^^i like your inner rhymes, Ice Pick, u did a great job on the flow fa real.. i couldn't find a weak spot in it.. you did a nice job in all aspectz.. , hit me up when u got sum more poems.. i enjoyed this one..
pz..

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