seemed like u put a lot of emotion into this one..

I hate living here and just living in general, because my family wasnt blessed with money i have to be poor forever. who in the fuck decided that the income of my parents past, would be the one thing in the future that can come back and ruin my ass. im not greedy im just trying to get a peice for myself, so when i find the dollas you can bring you and your fortune to hell.
^you had a nice use of wordz... and took it on a personal level where sum people may be able to relate, which is a good thing.. it did have rhymin' in it, but the structure was paragraph-like which didn't affect the poem but it didn't help separatin' your lines.. nice drop overall, and good personal contents.. good job..
pz..

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