ur verses were very nice, it reminded me of Kanye West's version not bad.. you had an aight structure a few misspellings but nice overall..

my favorite parts happened to be:
took your life for mine, so for that i quit my life of crime,
i turn to your name in a life of rhyme, gotta let you shine,
now i admit i hate those who dont believe us,
so i live for you, in the name of jesus,
^that was nice, the way it was worded was great.. contents is what matterz in the end and i felt you made your point come across while sticking to the topic well..
good job, get at me sumtime u two
pz..

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