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Old 11-12-04, 07:11 AM   #15
Wickedclown
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Voted For: â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€-

this was a way one sided battle... shit wasnt even close, heres my break down....

Two Bit- structure was WAY off... punches and personals were very soft and didnt hit at all, wordplay and creativity were not there at all... overall bad verse, elevate like hell homie... seriously... no hate tho man... 2/10

Godz- good verse... structure was stretched but okay overall.. punches and personals were presant and some hit fairly hard. wordplay and creativity were also there and worked in the overall content of ya verse... i was some what impressed... elevate still no doubt but u got mad potential so keep doin what u do and stay up....

no hate to twobit just elevate homie and ya could get there...overall one sided battle........

VOTE-Godz