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Old 11-12-04, 10:14 AM   #15
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I just don't give a fuck!
 
Posts: 2,017
From: UK
IP:

frein sort ya structure out. whats-with-spittin-LIKE-THIS?

anyway,

a1c

A1C:
Frein-ma$ter get ya shit together if ya think u gon blast me
Cuz u gone fuck around & get sonned worse than Last week
ehh, decent enough personal...
Iknoevel ate that wack verse u spit like it was nothin
& made u nut up quick.......kinda like when ya fuckin
nope...
But when I step up on the scene U gets clowned, right Bitch?
We should call u Mr. Hankey...cuz ya raps sound like shit
blah...
So sick, Bitch you think ya ill, are u for real!? No dawg
But U'd make a good crack dealer..cuz u can do a good blow job
nice punch, i guess...
Hoe stop, cuz my Punches will hit u in threes like a hat trick
While yours just lack flare...like SpongeBob & no Patrick
nah, not feelin it...
Fuckin fagget, face it, anything u say won't bother me
Cuz In the End U always lose...just like the lottery
Ok...nice closer.

Frein-Master

frein-ma$ter:
I'll dislocate all the bones in your body and have you really feeling OUT-OF-PLACE.
My Punches make A' see stars around his head like a night OUT-IN-SPACE.
blah..
A's intellect will never above frein's like his BRAINS-ON-THE-FLOOR,
Taming-this-whore, A's punches will "never hit home" like TRAINING OUTDOORS.
Ok...decent
Stab-crews, Frein break your bones so you're 'never straight' like 'fag-crews',
I'll tear up your paper every morning and really give A's family BAD-NEWS..
your best bar
Freein got A1C ready to leave us permantly cause he's GRABBING-A-SUITCASE,
Stab-him-with-true-faith, I'll 'make your own words hurt you' like HAVING-A-TOOTHACHE.
nope...
Cursing-his-life, this herb is just 'up to no good' like someone LURKING-AT-NIGHT,
Hurt-him-in-fights.. A will 'never get the job done' like WORKERS-ON-STRIKE!!..
blah...bad closer, wasn't strong enough.

Ok, close battle but i think A13 edge'd this just. first off, frein ya structure wasn't great. Whats with all the caps and dashes. If ya have good multies ya don't need 'em. A had a couple of nice lines wheras frein all i could see from u was the bad news one, that wern't great neither. a wins with a better structure and a few "nice" punches.

v/ A13