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Old 11-12-04, 03:03 PM   #39
~Lady Fiya~
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Anger and malice is manifested when cowards say wat they say//
My heart pumps blood like well oiled pistons mind set on making him pay//
Aint no delay in the rage i display aint no God gon hear da words that u pray//
Caz us tanglin wit violent intentions is gon get u like Jesus on his death day//
^the whole beginning was very nice, it only got better towards the end.. you put great emotion into ur topic.. and i like where it leaded.. ur vocab was nice, the imagery was excellent... you're pretty good at topicalz, u took this easily.. good job..
pz..
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