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Old 11-12-04, 04:25 PM   #12
Parallel
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

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k bad stucture weak punchlines weak vocabulary pretty much you got merked...i cant say to much elese but damn you need the mad elevation your best line:
Fuck an hour . . you retarded bitch all i need is a minutes..
I'll take you out of YA RETIREMENT.. and beat ya ass back init!!!
^thats it...

DrasticMeasurez:
good verse kinda off on the stucture but good punches good vocabulary not realy to much multis but a few...your best line probably:
ur messing with the real arsonist,my punches leave more burn-spots than dalmation
punches attatch with spikes rippin ya inner tissue,like an bullet went throug givin u an fixation
^^thats your best line...your opener...

vote: DrasticMeasures
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