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Old 11-12-04, 06:08 PM   #2
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yo exclusive that is a good verse man, nice punchez, nice structure, good vocabulary and a pretty nice flow, keep that up its a good verse and u a good textee...
epic man ur verse is aiight, but it seems like ur verse has been forced man, some ur lines dont even make sence anyways good battle you to..