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Old 11-13-04, 02:17 AM   #12
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Voted For: enygma

dysphoria:
you want some of this ? you sure ? come on kid you must be joking
like michael jackson, little boys assholes you be poking
quit strokin, your ego, cause sorry man but you aint all that
easy as 1 - 2 - 3 i pin your shoulders to the mat
^that was a bad way to start off your verse.. in a few places your verse stopped rhymin' (towards the end) the closer was so-so.. coulda been way betta, u need to elevate fa real




enygma
This kid ain't elevated.....matter of fact this kid's shorter
Just take a loook at his verse....all he's bringing is dis for ya?
^ i liked the sarcasm in the first bar.. pretty funny.. the lin about HIV test/ thinkin' positive was very creative.. you didn't have to come hard in this battle and it seems u knew that.. closer was str8.. pretty one-sided..

my vote is enygma cuz he had sum nice punches, enough to take out dysphoria easily.. -_- .. dysphoria u need to try harder and elevate your verses-punches/personals, fa real..
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