Voted For: Nostradamus

nos-i liked the way you tackled the topic it was creative the way you flipped the meanin n suggested a whole issue that confronts us in life...it was relative in content n i enjoyed the read..opener n body of the topical was dope..ya closer was good....emotion was evident at times but not excessive...
deffinately a real intrigue'n read n drop....props
dabatos-personally i thought ya piece lacked a bit..story was there but at times it was like filler n the content of ya bars fell off, you tackled the topical in a straight forward sense...which isnt very creative opener n body of ya verse was ok..closer was better...but it did'nt overcome the creativity in nos's verse...emotion was ok...but you need to reword some of ya lines for better delivery n not fallin off the flow....
nos gets my vote for takin a creative approach to the topic
n keepin it on track with the topic....good battle...

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!