lol..^^^prem this was a solid piece, opener n body of the verse was nicely done n you had great emotion in ya verse..i liked ya closer on this much more then otther om's that ive read they were good but this is better,i don't put #'s on drops usually
but this would be high if i did...!
like seroiously, you keep droppin like this n you'll be in the top 2or3 best poetry heads on site....i think your already top 10...nice drop dawg....

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!