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Old 11-13-04, 09:11 PM   #8
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Not a doubt Nostradamus took this. If this was a shot at your title Intro, I fel you coulda done a little better.

Nos, that verse was amazing, your lines connect so well, and the lyrical content is just amazing. The Layout, makes it much clearer and easier to read, and you need that in Topicals really.

Intro, verse was pretty dope, god knows I wouldnt have done better at all, but your lines were really stretched and that didnt work too well because it was hard to read, your lines were good, lyrical content wasn't that great but the idea was dope. You had quite a few spelling mistakes, kinna hard to figure out, anyways,

Nos got this, his verse was amazin
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