Try extending your line's a bit. You have good rhyme's just short line's.

every little thing seem's like violence to me
troubled youth everywere I see
from tv to dvdeven up in mtv
it's like it right to show corrupted imagry
with all this mind poulltution infecting me
all these strange thing's perplexing me
so i sit back and ask how can this be
is it right to be growning up in a world
were goverment spending more money on weaponry
and just letting poor people die'n Unnecessary
so take this as a lesson u see
with unity we can let poor live free
it time to spend less on weaponry
and investing in there future
it's this sorta thinking makes more sense to me

blah.. i just tryed to add more to it as an example....

but with longer line's you can get a better flow.

pz