Voted For: Joint-Boy

Breakdown:
snook:
IP:


Tha Joint Boy has entered tha Room, Drop down to da floor was a couple of schrooms
^weak opener, no originality or punch.
You probably like lil kids shows, Droppion nursery rhymes and flows
^best line you had but still very very very weak.
Leavin you like a lil bitch you are, You da baddest Mc i battled by far
^crap closer, no personal or punch, barely a diss.
work on finding original concepts and try to find hard hitting punches.
Mal-Function:
Ok,This Cat's Rhyme's So Wack that's why he's Restricted*
My Verbal Imagery so Surreal My Point Come's Depicted
^first line unexplained so why put the * and second line self up. wasnt feeling it.
Every Time He Drop's His Verse....He Don't get No Applause
He Could'nt "Hold On"..Even if he had Titanium Claw's
^ok line, decent punch, and you cant get any applause either this is the net.
Using a Portion Of My Skill Ta Force This Ho Obselete
No need Ta Post Ya verse-Just Press ctrl+alt+Delete
^used concept but still good.
In My Book a "Snook" Is a Anal lovin Dick Ridin Faggot
I'll Eat This Cat Just like Aboriginie's Do-To Maggot's
^Decent line, nothing amazing or special.
Empty Ya Organ's & Stash Em' All Over Ya Own Home
Specializin In Bussin Cap's Produced From Steel & Chrome
^Bad line, barely a diss.
Ill Clap Back On This Pussy While I Displace His Back
Disperse A Dope Track-Spew Acid Into His Pupil & Cataract
^Good line, best you had, no wordplay but it works.
Prize His Brain Stem & Spinal Cord & Shove It Up his Ass-
Blah! Let's end On a High Note:Never Ever Pass On Grass-
^Bad closer, nothing special.
Nothing special from you either, you pretty much just talked about what you were gonna do to him.
V/Mal_function for having better concepts but both need elevation.
return the fav.