Flow was hard to follow an i didnt like ya structure....

But the deepness an the story was so well put it out that any of that didnt matter...

I'm giving you a award...."Largest Verse ever read by Jay SmileZ" award...cause u had me reading from beginning to end...nice drop ma

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