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Old 07-28-02, 09:20 AM   #4
MC4Eyez
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It seemed to me like these two verses were a just sort of thrown together. I know that Black Flame's verse last week was far more impressive than this one, and I believe that UFW's was too, but I could be wrong.

UFW...It's Week 8..My 8th Bar And i Just ATE THE WEAK..
Your Knee's Shake - FUCK I Hate This Geek ..
'EAT FAKE' Like 'BK' U Cant 'TASTE THE MEAT'!
Nice lines. That was one of my favorite sections.

Strangle Ya, I'll Hand You-a .. L - EH(A) ..
And Kid i'm Not Abbreviating LOS ANGELES
LOL.

Had 'PUSSY IN YA MOUTH' ..
And Still Couldnt 'KEEP A STRAIGHT FACE'
That was funny.

Overall your verse had some nice creative punches, but your rhyme scheme was hard to latch onto. Probably would have been more conducive to audio. Also, it took a little while for your verse to heat up.

Black Flame...
but like cereal bars i rip your
(w)raps because your
contents break fast/ under prussure
you'll get rock like coal into
diamond, sun call me a eclipse
the way i stop you from shining/
your audio are bootee stop,
your not on beat like a off
duty cop
This secton was alright, as was the "hit dummies" line.

Vote: Black Flame for a more consistant verse.

Peace