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Old 11-14-04, 02:25 AM   #28
th-C
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Voted For: sabotage

sabo
nothing witty, but you had some connecting punches and disses, the peter parker was the nicest line, but it was filler so that took away from your verse.

[u]lyri[/u
a lot of your verse is filler.. and I seen played rhyme schemes like with the 'losin' thing going on, try to be more original and think of shit nobody has said.

Return the favor please.
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