Voted For: Phyzicks

kon
played concepts with the 'dope' and 'awfull', the thread punch was aight, nothing special here.. but the structure was there and the content was consistent enough.

lyri
please get rid of that structure so you will have some sort of flow, because the read gets annoying if the flow isn't there to support it.. especially when you're trying to get points across, plus 'std' and 'gay' punches are played, keep battlin'.

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