The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP:
Voted For: Introspect
Introspect: Damn you for this font size... I should vote against you for givin me a damn headache while reading this shit... But it was good, very very descriptive, almost over descriptive but it was a good story. I hate topicals for length but I cant hold it against you, all in all it was nice peice though.
Nostra: Much less descriptive, the story was told nonetheless and I think you did a good job as well but introspect got alot deeper into his subject, and painted a much more colorful picture with his novel of a verse... I guess I see where using a small font can help. Nothing you did wrong here, I just think your opponent handled it better here.. Vote Introspect.
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