retired.
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Voted For: Nostradamus
Vote Nos... sorry introspect... your lines were just too damn stretched out, your rhyming didn't make up for it... flow just not great.
Nos wasn't great in that respect, but not bad. His openening stanza was also decent, even if the rest was kinda meh.
Neither really told a great story though... I think both could have used more imagery and a nicer flow to keep the reader in it.
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