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mess with me get cooked
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aiiiiiight its an ok "free"
da flow was messed up in some parts and u had some good vocab
but dont try to stretch ya lines it's messing up da flow
but anyway good vocab nice rhyme scheme
i give u
7/10 work on da flow
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.
Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.
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