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Old 11-14-04, 04:38 PM   #18
Wickedclown
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Voted For: intensify effect

i hate to fuckin do this... goddamn i hate to...
wack battle, seen better from IE (shakes head)
aight this is my break down....

Sicka- horrible structure...elevate on that big time... flow was ok, played lines tho, def. work on that. punches and personals hit ok, overall a half way decent verse but could have been a lot better if you had been a little more creative with it and fixed the structure... overall id give it a 4/10

IE- like i said, ive seen better from you, ya structure was everywhere, wasnt feelin that at all... flow was good, punches hit a lot harder than his, had a personal or 2, nothing amazing on the personal aspect... creativity was ok. overall a better verse than sickas, 6/10

overall ive seen better but this was an ok battle... both of yall need to work on ya structure, no hate sicka... I HATE IE so you know this aint a hate vote against you, just gotta call em like i see em.... keep elevatin and stay up....

VOTE- IE.....................................