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Voted For: g_moneytildeath
this is quite possibly the wackest battle ever on the internet... here is my breakdown....
gmoney- flow was good, rhyme scheme was iffy, strucuture sucks, punches and personals were ok but could have been better... overall ya need to elevate homie... 2pac lines are kinda played and shit overall i give this verse a 3/10
young one- structure is HORRIBLE!!! fix that shit homie fo real, punches and personals didnt exist, ya shit didnt flow at all, didnt even rhyme half the time that i can tell... i think about all u rhymed was brain and name and mine and line... thats about it.... overall ya need to elevate BIG TIME, no hate tho but damn, elevate... overall 1/10... seems harsh but thats the way i see it
elevate...both of you... nuff said............
VOTE- Gmoney
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