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Old 11-14-04, 04:56 PM   #3
fluidmoon
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str8 fire, on point all the way through this piece,great vocab too.. dope shit man....1
my favorite part>>>>>>>dope word play in this.......

I'll tell you what the deal-is,kneel before the realest,
I peel-the-'tips' off 'vital-nerves' justso ya'll can 'feel-this',
I heal-lips..sippin' on your flows cause they failed the seal-test,
I deal-scripts and kill-kids with lyrical field-trips,conceal-clips..
I shield-hits with verbal-spits and double-barrel your heretics
I double-dare tricks to ride-dicks with bullshit between their hips,
cause "bare-tits" drive me 'wild' like 'lions' with veal-'strips',
my meal-is-bliss...a wolf dressed in sheep-skins,
missed my tiger-shark style; forgot to sea-fins,
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