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Old 11-14-04, 05:18 PM   #6
th-C
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Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

jay
nice multies, but bad structure..ur verse was more constructive and direct towards your opponent though and the punches hit nicely even though the flow was off..

lyrically
played punches and lines, and your verse was much shorter than your opponents, nothin was fluent and the rhyme scheme was simple, work on it.

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