Voted For: intensify effect

You make me “laugh” the way you freepost and just get ignored…
Its “funny” how u think your tough like the trucks made by Henry Ford…
^^^^weak opener...
Shit you crack me up with ur wack ability’s, damn u try to “hard”…
Even when ur “forcing” a fatty to come out ur still a piece of lard…
^^^DRY!
21 years old still on a “rap-site” u sicken me and still in violent type…
I couldn’t “vision” u “spin” on a table cuz ur shit aint fresh and ripe…
^^^mmm, pretty average...
Why don’t u leave a little to “old” and u still cant pack a punch…
Violent type the “youngest” crew and still an annoying bunch…
weak closer

xclusive!! “laugh” “funny" “old” “youngest”
is that what you call wordplay??? cause thats just fucked up ok!
bars were really strectched so pretty wack flow and structure wasnt that great... punches pretty soft, no real good ideas newhere... you need to be more creative

Talk Smack N i'll put gorillas on ya back like Minks-on-Puffy...
blow ya brain to the ceiling so u can Think-Above-Me...
^^^lol... a bit violent but that last line was nice
SON-Me?.. Never when u'r fake-style easy to spot like dots on lepord...
X Desperit to show off... so he add hes Street battles to hes N.E.T Record...
^^^ mmm dont really like it but not bad
and it's aint "timberland designe"... when i send "Lead-throu-He's-Red-Shirt"...
so i'll end ya befor u get "2 carryed away" like "Twins-On-A-Stretcher"....
^^^lol, good idea but needed better xecution
so better off battleing me during my first audio interludes....
cuz honestly U Can't Fuck With Me... like ya girl during her Men-U-Struls....
^^^^ dont like it
now X just go R.I.P... cuz im a Violent Type that just plated this crew like a flouris...
cuz Competition for me doesnt Exist like a Weed-a-soares....
^^^^ dry..... wack.... wtf so funny i forgot to laugh!

ie. lines also a bit strectched... i like your opener though... just that line could have merked xclusive
return the favour ok... laters!

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