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Old 11-14-04, 07:07 PM   #11
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Voted For: String9487

I think string took this

String-Humor is your verse is always a good thing, and that punchline about Dylan made me laugh.. But I guess im the only person on this forum that understands your structure..

Lyrical-It was alright but your punchlines didn't really reflect String.. The last line was the best out of yours, but work on them punches, no hate
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