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Old 11-14-04, 09:46 PM   #14
Ragnarok
...The Four Horsemen...
 
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Voted For: Nostradamus

Both of you were very dope in this topical battle this was a good batlte....but i felt that nostra came weak...intro came slight harder...
Nost: yours was very goood.. ince imagery.. it really flowed way mor better than intros.. but i liked how intro came into the concpet more in nbeings of talking about the area51 thing.. it really got me more interested instead of yours... but yours was much moer better when read.. introspect had way better vocab.... but i liked your rghyme sscheme better it wasnt basic.. so it was good.... you went off he topical slightly.. but then i liked how you got strongly too it in the 2nd verse.... it was rel good...
Intro: yours siht seemed to catch more of my attention from the area 51 and that rosewl inscident siht... yours was slighlty streched but it was good...hard to read though... but no points off dfor that.. it was more creative but it was good.... the end didnt seem to get much of my attention.... though the beggineing was way better....

vote : nostradamus by a very little

score: intro 78/100
Score: Nostra: 82/100
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War|Pestilence|
Death|Famine|


|Atrocious|
|Corruptive|Depraved|
|Heinous|Malevolent|Sinister|



That's pretty fucking evil to me.....



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