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Old 11-14-04, 10:48 PM   #16
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Distilled lets see if u can “represent” that name and stop time…
By “defending” your mom trying to get on me like a jiggly lime…
...6/10
How are you gonna be good at “audio” coming from the U.K…
Tempting to “sound” awful like a English men with tooth decay…
7/10
I cant believe you asked elephants if your raps were so “tricked-out”…
Then got “played” by animals with “dead” brains & now ur forgot about...
6/10
Im sry you don’t have to mention you like “cross-dressers” that’s ok…
Its iight you reach for ur 1 dollar on top the “table-dresser” to pay…
4/10
Im so sry English people are not a “force” of anything in crew fights…
You “push” & try to “squeeze” fat ones alot when u dont have the rights…
6/10

Ya punches were ok ya wordplay was overall better
and ya structure was pretty much on point
ya meta's were good this was one of your best battles i seen

You make less sense than chinese cartoon's dummy,
I mean we'r still all awaiting this 'Audio soon, coming'
7/10--LOL
I say awaiting, the word I'm looking for is dreading,
Who wants to here a 14 yr old, attempting story telling,
4/10
Especially a Faggot that wears pink at parties to be cool,
I look at Mike Hawk's sig, shit get's me rollin every time dude,
3/10
To be honest you can't type, So how you gonna battle??
Even your family hates you 'No pics of X up on the mantle'
6/10
Serious man, you'v got a face even a mother would hate,
Your like 'I'll be as good as you in 3 years when I elevate!!'
5/10

Damn u came out hittin on all cylinders wit ya opener
but u feel righ off after that
ya punches were simple and ya wordplay wasent elevated at all
i exspected alot more from u
overall u jus didnt bring it in this battle
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