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Nice nice, I am liking this piece, the only thing that I wasn't feelin' would have to be the overall landscape of it, the AABB rhyme structure is my least favorite, although I tend to do it still, I can't stop it, but it does make for a redundant piece, try to focus on a piece that doesn't have that rhyme scheme, it makes for a great piece when you dont have to restain yourself to a certain structure, nice piece though, keep writting I liked it...
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