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Old 11-15-04, 12:33 AM   #565
Jay-SmileZ
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Spit-Venomous-shit-that-rips-buildings-like-'bombs hit'
harming-an-poppin-lids-the-way-i-'charge clips'
apocal-ypse-set to so be ready fors 'gods fit
Brookl-LYN aint alarmIN i'm used to being 'HARD LIVED'

uhhhhhhhh yeah i had some shit put up in the free agent board...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160343

i also have a battle that i know i won, i came strong but my structure at the end was fucked cause i was doing my verse an my boy came over an we started talking an i noticed i had like 2 minutes left, i had the punches an all wrote up i just didnt fix the flow on the bottom...i didnt put my commas an periods an quotes on the punches at the end cause i dropped it right before 20 seconds before almost being DQed...so it sounds all fucked up cause i didnt give it that touch up...but fuck it!

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=160370

Do me a solid an vote the match so i can move on to the next battle
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