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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP:
Voted For: Plutonium
Like the weather...the chance of you winning is vain
like if you sold Strepsils...noone would choke in pain
7/10
your game...giving the word "failure" embarressment
claim you off da wack...when theres no comparisons
5/10
don't be arrogant...your ego's the size of a elephant
he even think showin' his 26-19 record is triumphant
4/10...2 forced here
I destroy you for enjoyment, so kid please don't fight
"Da Bury's Finest", that's why his corpse remains ripe
6/10
kid's not abstract...but you can't class him as object
kid's wack...no wonder Fashion's OPTIONAL SUBJECT!
5/10...Another forcedone
fact is this kid sucks, I'll destroy him with just a fork
who's using strings...a sewing machine does the work
6/10
kid's a jerk...I'll rip him up and fucking sew him again
the only highlight of his verse is when he just began
5/10
the string's gonna snap...it don't matter how I say it
got numbers in his name...it's his wackness calculated
6/10
to ranking 9487...that's more than RV's inactive heads
name's string...no wonder he's hanging on by a thread
6/10
he can't go far in his career...even if it's his big dream...
CAUSE NOONE KNOWS HOW LONGS A PIECE OF STRING!!!
5/10
Punches were a lil simple and plain
ya personals were good
ya wordplay and structure is wha won u this
this nigga just a Mule, cuz all u do is pack shit
neva heard ya single, guess u aint "radio"active
6/10
eh yo when them rifle's click
they have yo ass scramblin for safety like Michael Vick
2/10,,Played and stretched
I'll snipe this prick, got a vest thats twice as thick
but them things gon hit u, cuz lifes a bitch
2/10
im aimin at ya "bean", but nigga this aint Goya
u a ""gifted" rapper cuz i wouldnta paid for ya
4/10
Dis g wanna bitch, u can recieve a hunnid clips
those rhymes so bad, they make Stevie wonda flinch(ooouch)
4/10
dog u trippin, u need to get u some AK right
i spit Acid bars, make Plutonium, decay to Half-Life*
6/10
there aint nothin to u, u aint gon pop that
drop that, u just a pussey in a jock strap askin for is cock back(ooooh)
5/10
rap verse allowin hoes n sluts, wit no flows n such
wit crippled ass flows like they hold a crutch
2/10
unlike Jay, and Kells u the Less Of Both Worlds
n nebody that reads ya text, is gon hurl
2/10
u can exit now... , but u wont b right back
cuz u like that, in the room gettin spanked by Mike Jack..HAAAAAAAAA
4/10..Mike jackson lines played
Ya punches were tryin 2 hit but didnt deliver
ya wordplay was non existent
ya meta;s were ok
ya personals werent there
kinda like it was jus a freestlye
Plu 4 better punches and wordplay
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