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Old 11-15-04, 10:45 AM   #9
Wickedclown
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Voted For: JPoll

this was kinda lopsided but decent... imma break it down for ya here, good battle both of you....

Eastcoast... structure was aweful.. hate the / after every line and it wasnt set up correctly... flow was good, i liked the way you started off with the multis, that got you some points... punches were there, personals not so much... you had some wordplay and creativity, overall not a bad verse but could have been better....5/10

JPoll- shit was tight... structure was iffy, liked the opener about him claiming the whol east coast, shit was funny and thats a pluss... punches were good and the personals hit hard... multis...eh.... had wordplay and creativity... overall a good verse and the punches and personals won it for you... 7/10

overall this was a pretty decent battle... no hate to east coast but this one goes to Jpoll.....

VOTE-JPoll............