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IP:
Voted For: MeN-Iz
MeN-Iz
Personals: (7/10) this was the strongest part of your verse, you had really good personals my fav was
hate-my-rhymes?gkilla you is just a waste-of-time,i'll murder you with my lines,
where the medics at? quick go-and-find,cause im "KILLIN-THIS-NIGGA" like "BLACK-ON-BLACK CRIMES",
pretty dope there.
Structure: (5/10) seeing how this is text battles, some of your lines were stretched, diffcult to flow to in my head
and just not really that greatly organized.
Overall: (6.5/10) i gave you a 6.5 because some of your verse was stretched, and did flow great at all. But you had
fairly good punches and personals so that is what gave most of your verse the illness.
GKillaz05
Personals: (4/10) this was not a very strong part of your verse. The best punch you had here was
Went my verse without mentioning your lame crew...
So when Da RIP wins Violent Type wont blame you...
it was aiight, but that great. Some of the lines were kind of generic though.
Structure: (8/10) This is pretty much what the good part of your verse was. It was very easy to
read and flow to. the lines transisted good, and the length of all lines were str8.
Overall: (6/10) This was very close, but you could of won this with some better more directed
personals/punches to MeN-Iz, keep elevating .pz.
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