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Old 11-15-04, 05:32 PM   #11
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Voted For: Premanition

Askin rhetorical questions, “whos nxt?”, won’t want the answer…
Cos ya skill like ya girl’s chest, need something to enhance~ya…(*)
^^nice opener , fresh concept
This kid got a bunch of multis but punches got played concepts…
I’d say im shaggin ya girlfriend, but damn that claims nonsense…
^^lmao,.....but not hard hittin..
‘Epic’, ~‘Thriller’ in this thread wen I merk this ‘paedophile’…(**)
Dawg ur 18 with a girl looking spotty, immature and juvernile…
^^ok,
Fuck confident, u’d put ur house on me if u were a bettin~man…
Cos u know like I know, 4 all ur wins u’ve neva faced a veteran…
^^meh weak...
P.I.N.K on the straight n narrow…lol….wiv ya leaders name…(***)
Thinking u ‘jesus’…’cross’ wiv me n u bout to ‘bleed to fame’…
^^not bad...
overall you had some ok punches, focus on harder hitting personals n get some wordplay in there, it'll help...

Come On Is A Premonition Really Necessary For This Occasion?
You Wanna Battle? You'll Lose I'm Like A Mathamatical Equation
^^nonsense..weak
Look Out It's An Invasion P.I.N.K Running Threw Ya Whole Crew
One By One Get Slaughtered Starting Off With Little Old You
^^man, wtf?..?
Mind Above Body? Hmm A Minority Statement According To You
Cant Spell Premonition RIght ,What A Clown ,Your A Fool
^^lmao, wheres the punch?
As A Matter Of Fact Kid,You As Worthless As Hang-Ho
"Pre"Writing Like Getting "Pre Tickets" At Fan-Dang-O
^^omg...nope..!
Your Eternal Infected With Tha Sick Rhymes Im Throwing
Forever Elivating And Like A RIver Over-Flowing
^^nope..!
Im Abusive With Explicit Lyrics Watch Where You "Stand"
For I Leave You "Paralized" Better Yet End Your Entire Life Spand
^^nononope..!, fuck are you tryin?
Stand Amongst Me Solitude And I'll Leave You WithOut A Jaw
Remove Your Tounge You Cant Spit And Drop You Back Like A Ball
^^meh...
I'm An Aggresive Mind On Tha Mic That's YOUR Premonition
Left You Eternaly Damaged It's About Time You Call Your Phisician
^^filler again..
My Mission Wasnt Hard Bring You To Tha Front Line And I Succeeded
Ya Verse Was Pointless Was Never Even Needed
^^meh ok concept but played n written badly...
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man this is the worse verse ive ever seen from you,
i cant believe you expected to win against any1 with such a poor level of punches n no personals...
you need to go read the tutorials again son...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!